This blog post will provide a link to my QRG and ask for help with comments and critiques.
My draft addresses the controversy of the mismanagement of Pompeii and the different arguments discussing the best way to try and mend the endangered site. It has several different topic points about Pompeii, including issues with tourism, funding, corruption, and poor restoration. I followed the "C" rubric to begin with. I tend to be a bit wordy when I write so please let me know if you find anything to be too long or if you feel it has unimportant information! Also please let me know about general spelling errors, sentences that sound weird, if you feel additional information is needed, or really anything in general that you feel would benefit my QRG.
Thank you!
My QRG can be found here
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Hey just so you know! I can't use your link. I don't know if it's just me, but just a heads up! :)
ReplyDeleteI can't either, you should fix it before he sees so you can get full credit.
ReplyDeleteOh shoot!!!! I redid the link, hopefully it's not too late! Thank you guys for letting me know!
ReplyDeleteReading your draft, I really find it interesting. I double checked to see if i could find any clarity issues, but I could not see any that were really apparent. Your wordiness is perfectly laid out. I like your paper!
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