Draft of Public Argument

Here is my first draft of my public argument! Please feel free to compare it to examples I have provided previous to this and make lots of comments. Clarity, sentence structure, presentation of images, etc. I also feel as though my conclusion is weak and was unsure how to tie in the elements I wanted to discuss without making the paper too long. Enjoy and let me know what you think!

Stockman, Daniel "Corgi Puppies 36" March 12, 2011
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Access the draft right HERE and here is an article you can compare it to XXX