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Sunday, October 18, 2015

Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2

This blog post will have a link to a detailed paragraph analysis on my rhetorical analysis paper.

After reading and analyzing my essay, it seems pretty clear that I definitely need to put more work into the analysis of this. While each paragraph has a fairly clear main point, not all of them are very well developed and could use more evidence. The internal organization is pretty straight forward as a "point by point" sort of essay. However, paragraphs could use smoother transitions and link ideas more strongly between them.

It can be found right HERE.

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